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Francesca Bossert's avatar

You need someone to sing/rap these words, my sweet! I can already hear it in my head. Beautiful.

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Awww! Thanks so much Francesca! I never thought of that, honestly.

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Francesca Bossert's avatar

Close your eyes, listen to the music in your words. It’s amazing!

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks! I'll have to try. My son actually writes his own songs and sings with guitar. It's amazing! He listens to dark music so maybe;)

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Francesca Bossert's avatar

I did a silly rap once with one of my poems, and recorded it. I put it on here and then chickened out and deleted it 😂😂 It was DJ Bonk’s rap. I’m not sure it’s still on here as a poem, but probably! It was so much fun to do and I even wore a baseball hat sideways 😂😂 I kept having to start over because I was laughing so much.

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Jane Deegan's avatar

That's hilarious!! I should try myself I need a good laugh. I take myself way too seriously sometimes

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Well done, Jane! I always enjoy your work.

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks so much, C.J.

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C.J. Heck's avatar

You’re welcome, Jane.

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Vince Roman's avatar

Loved this

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks, Vince

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John O'Neill's avatar

Wonderful

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks, John!

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