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Joan Stommen's avatar

I trusted the water, I trusted me…love this line! And how you knew the moment was now. they never come again. Just beautiful writing, Jane! I love the water too and I could just feel you drifting and floating and that free-falling feeling! Bravo my friend… brilliant wrting! 🥰🫶👍♥️

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks so much, Joan!!

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Jo-Ann Petrarca's avatar

Jane, this was easy breezy. I love the water, it’s so good for the soul. Thank you sweetie

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks so much @jo-ann

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Jo-Ann Petrarca's avatar

You’re very welcome

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Rea de Miranda's avatar

A beautiful love song to the sea, Jane. 💙🩵

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks so much, Rea!

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Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

Jane,loved every word of it

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks so much, Kathleen

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Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

You’re welcome, Jane

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Paul McCutchen's avatar

Every time I am at the beach I always remember I used the beach to get in shape by running in the loose sand. I was getting ready for August practice. Now I look at the distance to the beach and wonder if sharks a waiting for me in the water.

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Lol. See jaws one too many times? Lol. Loose sand and knees = no good. The braces help

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Kyen Jimwan's avatar

So comforting 🩵

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks! This is a favorite of mine

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks so much, Jo-Ann! The ocean is so good for the soul. I'm needing that now

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