Cool open ending inviting the reader to take this further. Time is seen as linear and then you read about concepts of time in other realms and you try to figure out how they connect. Trying holding on to it and it's like water, endless but not to be grasped. Thank you for this poem.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting on my poem. I like leaving it open to interpretation, but sometimes I'm not even sure what my poetry is about!
Moments in time seem to always slip away.
They really do!
It’s that roller coaster of life. Ups & downs so fast, so outta control. Blink and it’s over.
For sure!
Cool open ending inviting the reader to take this further. Time is seen as linear and then you read about concepts of time in other realms and you try to figure out how they connect. Trying holding on to it and it's like water, endless but not to be grasped. Thank you for this poem.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting on my poem. I like leaving it open to interpretation, but sometimes I'm not even sure what my poetry is about!
I guess it changes over time. You’re welcome!