Shifts in Time
Shifts in time
somewhere in my mind
This world evolves
so much to solve
time slips on
grief from it all
as moments fall
away from me
and all I can see
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Shifts in time
somewhere in my mind
This world evolves
so much to solve
time slips on
grief from it all
as moments fall
away from me
and all I can see
Moments in time seem to always slip away.
Cool open ending inviting the reader to take this further. Time is seen as linear and then you read about concepts of time in other realms and you try to figure out how they connect. Trying holding on to it and it's like water, endless but not to be grasped. Thank you for this poem.