Now that is how to introduce characters. Short, sweet and too the point. Each is unique, has their own pov, pushes the story, and creates intrigue. Great stuff.
Thanks, John. I appreciate it. I have been writing my whole life (and took a hiatus) for my careers and raising a family. I've never tried to publish. I hope to eventually for this. It's a learning curve
Now that is how to introduce characters. Short, sweet and too the point. Each is unique, has their own pov, pushes the story, and creates intrigue. Great stuff.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting. This is my 2nd draft. I post 2 chapters each Saturday. Stay tuned
I can't wait to see what happens next! I definitely want to read more. Well done Jane!
Thanks so much Janine! It's a work in progress! I'll be posting Chapters 3 and 4 next week. Stay tuned
I loved it, Jane. Looking forward to reading more.
Thanks, so much Kathleen! It's a work in progress as I am editing this 2nd draft as I go. Chapters 3 and 4 next Saturday
This is great! I’m looking forward to reading more 😊
Thanks so much, Darcy. 38 more to go ;) This is in the rough draft phase, so more or less
Great story 😎👌
Thanks so much, Angela for stopping by to read and comment. Truly appreciate
You are a great writer Jane in a time when most of them are gone.
Thanks, John. I appreciate it. I have been writing my whole life (and took a hiatus) for my careers and raising a family. I've never tried to publish. I hope to eventually for this. It's a learning curve