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Nick Richards's avatar

Yes and no

Brain says stop

Brain says go

We’re in charge

Don’t you know?

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Yes!! If only!

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♡Ashley Schmitt♡'s avatar

I love poetry, especially if it has a deeply rooted message. Nicely done ✔️

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks!!

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Mahmoud Owies's avatar

You are very talented!

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks! I felt like this was a basic post, yet it says a lot.

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Mahmoud Owies's avatar

I read longer posts, deeper posts…but what amazes me is that you can deliver the feelings with very few words.

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks so much! That means a lot

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Powerful 😊

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks, Brenda!

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

It those little gems that strike such a pose. This one did that.

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Rea de Miranda's avatar

I think some of our plights are caused by our actions. But most of it we have no control over.

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Agree! It's a reminder I need!

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Paul McCutchen's avatar

The poem is like a see-saw. Some things are good, and some things are not so good.

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks Paul. So many ups and down and extremes sometimes

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