Less or more
Yes and no
Brain says stop
Brain says go
We’re in charge
Don’t you know?
Yes!! If only!
I love poetry, especially if it has a deeply rooted message. Nicely done ✔️
Thanks!!
You are very talented!
Thanks! I felt like this was a basic post, yet it says a lot.
I read longer posts, deeper posts…but what amazes me is that you can deliver the feelings with very few words.
Thanks so much! That means a lot
Powerful 😊
Thanks, Brenda!
It those little gems that strike such a pose. This one did that.
I think some of our plights are caused by our actions. But most of it we have no control over.
Agree! It's a reminder I need!
The poem is like a see-saw. Some things are good, and some things are not so good.
Thanks Paul. So many ups and down and extremes sometimes
Yes and no
Brain says stop
Brain says go
We’re in charge
Don’t you know?
Yes!! If only!
I love poetry, especially if it has a deeply rooted message. Nicely done ✔️
Thanks!!
You are very talented!
Thanks! I felt like this was a basic post, yet it says a lot.
I read longer posts, deeper posts…but what amazes me is that you can deliver the feelings with very few words.
Thanks so much! That means a lot
Powerful 😊
Thanks, Brenda!
It those little gems that strike such a pose. This one did that.
I think some of our plights are caused by our actions. But most of it we have no control over.
Agree! It's a reminder I need!
The poem is like a see-saw. Some things are good, and some things are not so good.
Thanks Paul. So many ups and down and extremes sometimes