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wildflower's avatar

Very atmospheric!!

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Nick Richards's avatar

No way out

Is not how I play

The walls close in

I get out anyway.

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Good point. A words to a song?

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Nick Richards's avatar

No, just made it up after I read your poem.

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Vince Roman's avatar

Love this

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks!

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Paul McCutchen's avatar

And that is the reason I don't do hunted houses.

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