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Dea Devidas's avatar

This carries so much raw power. The rhythm itself feels like running - pushing forward, stumbling, rising again. There’s resilience woven into every line, the quiet fight of proving yourself, not just to others, but to your own reflection.

The lines "Shiny objects you all see, but not my poetry" hit hard. The weight of being seen for the surface, but not for the soul. And yet, despite it all: you moved ahead.

No, don’t change your song. Let it be heard. This is strength, and it stands on its own.

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Mary Pierce's avatar

The story I tell myself is the only one that counts. ☺️

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