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Old Codger Steve's avatar

Been there, done that

All to easily said

But I have felt it, let it rest in me.

Heard the mountains silence

Treasured the Awe it brings

The joy, the solitude the aloneness but never lonely

Anxiety disapated, calm again

At one with nature

The balm for the soul

Lovely poem

Thankyou

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks Steve!

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Gayle Beavil, MA, BEd, CAPP 🇨🇦's avatar

Jan this is my favourite poem of yours so far! I love how you added the “plights” in.

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Jane Deegan's avatar

I think I use the word plights in many of my poems 🤔 😅. It always seems to work

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks so much, Gayle. I wrote it quickly and I felt it was generic but it's growing on me more!

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Caitlin McColl 🇨🇦's avatar

beautiful! as always. love the different fonts!

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks so much, Caitlin!

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Maryan Pelland Pen2Profit's avatar

Your poetry is nicely visual and I think the text formatting is a great addition! You evoke relatable images and the photos you choose add to it all. Nice.

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks so much, Maryan!

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Mahmoud Owies's avatar

❤️❤️💙❤️

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