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William E Hime's avatar

I love the opening of chapter 19. The big shift in the dinamics of our home, it's routine, and comfort - All changing in that moment when the last person leaves for the day.

Options reveal themselves;

Bake cookies to surprize the family.

Throw in the laundry and read a book.

Stalk the new neighbor from the woods behind their house.

Move the body from the locked freezer in the garage.

Sit amounst my trophies out in the shed.

Start a new chapter..

So many options!

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mitch's avatar

Great story so far my dear friend ,Jane . I love it and yes it is a very deep thriller , Waiting to see next part . hugs to you and love to you and your family ,Everyone should be reading this story

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