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Beth L. Gainer's avatar

Hi Jane,

A beautiful poem. Truly poignant and heart-breaking, but at the same time triumphant.

Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I truly appreciate your support, Beth.

Ken Macko's avatar

Maybe unseen then. Definitely visible now !! You ARE the real deal 😊

Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks, Ken. I always was :)

Deegs's avatar

Proud of you.... braver than me! ❤️

Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks. One of my most difficult posts and time to remember.

Christina Migone-Benfield's avatar

Of course she was! (always a writer). I relate deeply. Great to see you shining!

Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks so much, Christina. I appreciate you taking the time to comment and being here.

Jennifer Ward Dudley's avatar

I see you. Clear as the mirror on your face

Jane Deegan's avatar

Thank you! That skinny, scared, misunderstood child is still surfaces sometimes. I'm trying not to forget her and make peace with her.

Jennifer Ward Dudley's avatar

I said. Mirror image. Time. It’ll take more to shed the wounds. Have a good old fashioned battle with her.

Jane Deegan's avatar

Thanks, Jennifer.